Talk about the benefits and how it gives the audience relief to any pain they’re experiencing.
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When you’re starting out in business, you want to feel empowered, inspired, and most importantly, confident in how you’re showing up for your business.
At this retreat, you’ll feel [big benefit] without [pain point they’re trying to get away from].
Talk about why this feature of your program is essential to their growth and why you’ve included it in your program.
Talk about why this feature of your program is essential to their growth and why you’ve included it in your program.
This is your space to talk about the benefits of your program/offering and how it can help your audience achieve everything they want in life (or at least address a pain point they’re experiencing).
Stay in the positive and focus on the aspirational things they want to achieve in their life, rather than coming at it from a thing they want to get away from.
Keep addressing why this is THE THING that will help them achieve the goal they want in life.
To help your paragraphs flow and be skimmable, keep them short (2-4 lines).